“This is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,” she said with a smile.
“Unless you are following the dialogue with an action and not a dialogue tag.” He took a deep breath and sat back down after making the clarifying statement.
“However,” she added, shifting in her seat, “it’s appropriate to use a comma if there’s action in the middle of a sentence.”
“True.” She glanced at the others. “You can also end with a period if you include an action between two separate statements.”
Things I didn’t know
“And–” she waved a pen as though to underline her statement–“if you’re interrupting a sentence with an action, you need to type two hyphens to make an en-dash.”
You guys have no idea how many students in my advanced fiction workshop didn’t know any of this when writing their stories.
I am working away on edits for @devikafernando for her new Inn Love Series! Her first story is set in B&B in England and features a long-legged, handsomely rugged gentleman, named Jonathan… *cough, cough* ANYWAY, it’s so good, and I’m so honored she asked me to edit for her! But she couldn’t really say no, since the series came from an off-handed suggestion I made months ago!
Tantalizing Temptations will be available for sale November 29!
Thank you SO MUCH, for a whole list of things. *hugs* @cassmichaels
Now excuse me, I gotta go bite my nails while I wait for feedback.
Wow! This amazing!!! Congrats and can’t wait!! 🤗
Thank you, hun! Even though I’ve got more than 10 books out already it’s thrilling and terrifying every single time. 😀 @sf0206
Congratulations @devikafernando ..so excited to read this one…